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Editorial Style Guide


About this style guide

This Style Guide describes the "house style" used in the Berkeley Computing and Communications newsletter. You may find it useful if you are working on other IST publications or websites. Please send comments to IT Communications staff.

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Other style guides and references

After this style guide, in order of precedence, see

You can get a photocopy of the University Relations Style Guide from Kalle Nemvalts or IT Communications staff. This writeup describes exceptions to the other guides, and a number of additions having to do with computer terminology and usage.

For names and titles of campus personnel, organizational units, or buildings, see the printed

See back issues of Berkeley Computing and Communications for additional examples of usage. For current computer usage, see the trade press and the native documentation for the computing environments under discussion.

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Abbreviations, acronyms

Spell out words (e.g., mathematics, professor) instead of abbreviating. Do not use symbols such as "%" and "&" except in tabular material. See the University Relations Style Guide.

Exceptions: units of measure (e.g., KB, MB, bps), campus unit names as shown in the Campus Telephone Directory (e.g., Business & Administrative Services).

Spell out acronyms on first use and append them in parentheses, e.g.,

Exception: use the acronym by itself when the acronym is more familiar than the full name (e.g., Fortran, IBM).

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Boldface

Use boldface for command names and, generally, to indicate literal text that is to be entered as-is into a computer:

Exception: use plain text for pathnames, URLs, email addresses, and other pieces of literal text that by their punctuation are clearly distinguishable as computer text:

However, use boldface to set off single-word Unix filenames that are not otherwise distinguishable as computer text.

Avoid starting a sentence with a boldface computer command.

Do not use quotation marks to delimit computer text.

Do not use boldface for emphasis. Use italics instead. Exception: in certain web contexts, boldface may be more effective than italics in making selected words stand out against plain text, so boldface may be useful for emphasis. But avoid boldface for emphasis in print.

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Campus buildings

Spell out campus building names in full, including words such as "Hall", "Building", or "Annex":

Avoid constructions such as

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Capitalization

See the Commonly-Used Word List. For general rules see the University Relations Style Guide and other style guides.

For capitalization in titles, BC&C uses "downstyle", i.e., capitalize the first word and any proper names.

Always capitalize the first word of a sentence, section heading, or title even if the first word is a proper name that is "not supposed" to be capitalized.

BC&C column names are capitalized, followed by a colon, followed by the title in downstyle caps:

In names of software releases, consider words such as "Version" and "Revision" to be part of the proper name:

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Comma-separated lists

Use the "serial comma", i.e., the comma before the last item in a series:

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Computer command examples and prototypes

Follow the native conventions of the operating system documentation, or use these rules: (1) Use boldface for literal elements to be typed as-is. (2) Use italics for variable elements. (3) Use square brackets [ ] for optional elements. Following is an example Unix command prototype:

Command examples and prototypes are most clearly presented on a separate, indented line.

For Unix commands, use en dashes (not hyphens) for command-line flags. Check and adjust the spacing between command-line elements to make sure they do not appear to run together.

For examples in which columnar alignment is important, a monospace font such as Courier can be used.

For interactive examples, which mix user input with computer output, use boldface to indicate the user input, and plain text to indicate the computer output.

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Computer words

When generic, lowercased words are used in a computer-specific meaning, set them off in an appropriate way, e.g., in boldface, to distinguish them from normal English words:

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Dashes, hyphens

See the Chicago Manual and the University Relations Style Guide. In HTML documents, indicate em dashes (long dashes) by two hyphens (with spaces before and after):

Use en dashes to form compounds where one of the elements consists of several words: This HTML document uses a hyphen here but, in a printed document, it would be an en dash. Use en dashes also for Unix command-line flags.

On the Macintosh, to typeset the en dash, use the key combination Option-[hyphen]. For the em dash, use Option-Shift-[hyphen].

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Contact information

BC&C uses the following, typical format for customer-service contact information:

Contact User & Account Services, 241 Evans Hall, 642-7355, accounts@socrates.berkeley.edu.
This is more concise than
Visit User & Account Services at 241 Evans Hall, or call 642-7355, or send electronic mail to accounts@socrates.berkeley.edu.
The elements can be listed in order of importance, e.g., email address first if that is the preferred mode of contact.

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Dates, times

See the University Relations Style Guide.

Do not spell the day of the month as 1st, 2nd, 3rd, 4th, etc.

Omit the year if it is clear from the context. For example, in a publication dated December 1996, both of the following are clear:

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Email addresses

Email addresses should be fully qualified with domain names:

Use plain text for literal elements, italics for variable elements. Here's one exception, where boldface is used for clarity:

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Emphasis

Avoid all caps or boldface for emphasis:

If emphasis is needed, use italics. Exception: in certain web contexts, boldface may be more effective than italics in making selected words stand out against plain text, so boldface may be useful for emphasis. But avoid boldface for emphasis in print.

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Gender

See the University Relations Style Guide. Avoid constructions such as

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Hypertext links

In the HTML version of BC&C, links are indicated in the following, typical way:

The link (the underscored part) should use the actual title of the work. The URL of the link can be appended in parentheses. See the section URLs. If the text will appear both online and in print (as BC&C does), the URL will be important to readers of the print version.

If the URL has a preferred alias, e.g., wss.berkeley.edu instead of tuna2.berkeley.edu, use the alias. Check with the webmeister of the target site.

Since the link (the underscoring) already delimits and sets off the title, further delimiting is often unnecessary. Avoid, for example, using underscoring and quotes together:

The link should be clearly identified, by actual title and URL if necessary, so that the reader can see what it is without having to follow it. Avoid constructions such as the following, where the destination is unclear:

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Hyphenation of compound adjectives

See the Commonly-Used Word List and the Chicago Manual, Table 6.1, pp. 219-231.

Compound adjectives such as high-speed or fixed-length are hyphenated as needed for clarity. Compound adjectives of the form number-unit are always hyphenated:

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Italics

Italics are used for general emphasis, for titles of works, for variable elements of computer syntax, and for introducing new terms along with their definitions.

Italics may also be used for entire paragraphs of supplementary text, such as editor's notes.

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IST

IST (not IS&T) is the acronym for Information Systems and Technology.

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KB, MB

KB (kilobyte) usually means 2^10 (1024) bytes.

MB (megabyte) usually means 2^20 (1048576) bytes, which is more than 1000 KB, which is more than 1000000 bytes.

GB (gigabyte) is defined accordingly.

Leave a space between the number and the unit. Do not use "K" by itself. Avoid

In some contexts, such as Macintosh Finder widows in the List view, the "800K" notation has become conventional. Follow the convention in these contexts. But in BC&C body copy, use the "800 KB" notation.

Some units used in networking, such as kbps (kb/s), use "k" in the conventional scientific sense to mean 10^3 (1000) instead of 2^10 (1024). This is indicated by putting the "k" in lower case.

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Keyboard, names of keys

The names of keys (or key combinations) for nonprinting characters are treated as proper names:

Here are some examples in context: The last example shows that sequences of printing characters are treated as literal text. Use the verb "press" for key combinations and the verb "type" for literal text.

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Lead-in sentence to an indented example or list

Here are two different examples of sentences introducing indented material (both are correct):

In the first example, the lead-in sentence is complete in itself, so it is terminated by a colon.

In the second example, the lead-in sentence continues without a break into the example, so no punctuation is used (and a period is implied at the end).

Punctuate as though the lead-in continued into the example without a line break and indentation. This writeup contains many examples of such lead-ins.

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Machine names

Treat machine names as proper names:

Exception: when the machine name is part of an email address or computer command, write it in lower case:

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Menu entries (Windows or Macintosh)

Use the greater-than sign (>), rendered as > in HTML, to indicate a sequence of successive menu choices:

Capitalize menu entries as they appear in the software. Use quotes to set them off only if needed for clarity.

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Numbers

See the University Relations Style Guide.

We differ slightly from that style guide in that we write numbers without commas in scientific and computer contexts:

Commas are OK in other contexts such as the following:

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Numbers with units of measure

Compound adjectives of the form number-unit are always hyphenated:

However, if the unit functions as a noun, there is no hyphen:

Use a space (or hyphen) between the number and unit of measure:

Don't run these together (256KB). Don't use "K" by itself (800K floppy disk); it needs a unit to complete it (800 KB floppy disk).

In some contexts, such as Macintosh Finder widows in the List view, the "800K" notation has become conventional. Follow the convention in these contexts. But in BC&C body copy, use the "800 KB" notation.

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Paths (Windows or Macintosh)

When describing a path through a series of nested folders, use colons (with spaces before and after) to separate folder names:

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Photo credits

Online: Put photo credits either in the caption of the photo, or in italics at the end of the article.

Print: Put photo credits either in the caption of the photo, or at the end of the masthead.

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Plurals

See the University Relations Style Guide. For acronyms, use the following as models:

Apostrophes (') are used only if needed for clarity:

Avoid using (s) to indicate an optional plural:

The usual plural form already conveys the idea of indefinite number (zero, one, or more):

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Quotation marks

Follow the Chicago Manual.

In some technical contexts, it may be better to modify the Chicago Manual rules as follows. Place end punctuation outside the quotation marks unless it is actually part of the material inside the quotation marks:

This is more of a "British" usage, and makes the treatment of quotation marks more consistent with that of parentheses and brackets. If the material inside the quotation marks is a complete sentence, of course, then the ending period goes inside. This style is more "logical" in a formal syntactic sense, but if you are more comfortable with the Chicago Manual rules, you can stick with them

Do not use quotes to delimit material that is already delimited in some other way (all caps, underscored hypertext link).

Do not use single quotes interchangeably with double quotes, or single quotes to delimit literal text (as in some early Unix documentation).

Use quotes to set off titles of web pages, menu entries, and dialog-box options as needed for clarity:

Sometimes capitalization by itself is sufficient and the quotes are not needed.

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References

Put reference numbers in brackets.

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Release and version numbers

In names of software releases, consider words such as "Version" and "Revision" to be part of the proper name, and capitalize them:

When abbeviating, use lowercase "v".

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Spacing between words

Use one space (not more) between words and between sentences. Most word processors provide a search function that can be used to search for multiple spaces.

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Slash (/)

Avoid the use of the slash (/) in constructions such as

The construction "and/or" can usually be replaced by "or" alone. In other cases, the slash can often be replaced by "and", "or", or a comma.

The slash is OK, of course, in pathnames, URLs, and other computer usages.

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Symbols

Do not use symbols such as "%" and "&" except in tabular material. See the University Relations Style Guide.

Exception: campus unit names as shown in the Campus Telephone Directory (e.g., Business & Administrative Services).

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Telephone numbers

Spell out the full seven-digit number, giving the area code if the context calls for it:

If the reader can be assumed to be local or to know that the campus area code is "510," then omit the area code. However, avoid leaving out the "64" prefix:

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Trademarks

It is not necessary (or practical) to acknowledge every trademark that appears in our publications or websites. However, the About This Publication section of BC&C does acknowledge a short list of major trademarks, the ones most commonly used in that publication. (Historically, BSD Unix was developed at UC Berkeley, which put us in the operating-system business. Thus we were legally required to acknowledge that the Unix trademark belonged to someone else.)

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URLs

A URL (Uniform Resource Locator) is an "address" of an Internet information resource, which can be used to form a hypertext link to that resource. See the section Hypertext links. Following are some examples of how URLs are treated in print in BC&C:

If the URL is a "directory" type, include the slash at the end; the pointer to "index.html" (or the default index page) is implied.

If the URL has a preferred alias, e.g., wss.berkeley.edu instead of tuna2.berkeley.edu, use the alias. Check with the webmeister of the target site. If you check the site with a browser, you may not see the preferred alias.

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